successes criteria

in writing we have been leaning to write a persuasive piece of writing . we have co-construed our successes criteria. Here is our successes criteria



o Title: Clearly states what you are going to be talking about


Example: Eating Edible Bugs


o Hook: A way to pull your audience in (possibly a rhetorical question, weird and wacky fact or setting a scene).


Example: Are you sick and tired of the same old meal every single night, run out of inspiration for dinner ideas and the family just don’t appreciate your hard work around dinner? Well now you can add the crunch back into your evening meals with interesting and creative dinner ideas.


o Clearly stating what your topic is about / Statement


Example: I believe that everyone should cook with insects.

I believe… I think… I strongly recommend… In my opinion… that all people should eat insects


o Background information: Use broad interest facts


Example: When people hear of others eating bugs they normally screw up their face and say, “Yuck!” But did you know most people who try insects actually end enjoying them. My challenge for you today is to try insect.



o Lead in sentence to your paragraphs (at the end)


There are many reasons why we should eat insects in our diet such as bug are healthy and low in fat, tasty fun treats and you be creative with recipes from all over the world.

Weaving

In room six we have been learning about all souls and all saints day . We did some weaving and wrote words about what we should do to be able to go to heaven .

Biking

in room six we have been doing a bike course. Bike foot came and taught our class bike safety it was really fun. I can't wait till next year to do the big foot bike course. :) 

Year 5 retreat

This week the year five at good shepherd went to year five retreat.  We did fun activities like a treasure hunt and a fun game with leaves.We did prayer and talk about how to be a good leader. I loved it it was so fun.

In room 6 we made a waka showing what we are. My word is unique and we drew a picture of our self. I had lots of fun doing this.

Kia kaha

In room 6 we have been learning about kia kaha. Kia Kaha is about caring an d respecting other people differences and similarities. we have made shields to show why we are unique